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Thrillerfest 2013



Alexandra Sokoloff
Alexandra Sokoloff

I just got back from
Thrillerfest 2013, held at the Grand Hyatt Hotel in Manhattan, where I picked up a lot of great information. It was my 7th Thrillerfest and I always learn something new.

One session, given by thriller writer Alexandra Sokoloff, discussed how novelists can adapt a formula used for TV and film scripts to their books - to keep readers hooked. She was a great instructor, and I’d like to share the highlights of her lecture.

Most films and TV shows follow the same type of plot point outline that divides a story into eight sequences. Each block should end with a mini climax - it could be a bold statement made by a character, or something as simple as asking an unanswered question; having a phone ring; or a knock on the door (on TV, is usually comes right before a commercial break). The key is to keep the audience/reader wondering what happens next. This works for a half hour sit-com, a 1-hour drama, or a 2-hour film. For a 400 page book, a sequence would cover about 50 pages.


ACT 1
Sequence 1

Call to adventure

Seq. 1 mini-climax @15 minutes


ACT 1

Sequence 2

The status quo has changed

Seq. 2 mini-climax @30 minutes


ACT 2:a
Sequence 3

The hero devises a plan

“hero is winning”

Seq. 3 mini-climax @45 minutes


ACT 2:a

Sequence 4

Something goes horribly wrong

“game changer”

Seq. 4 mini-climax @ 60 minutes


ACT2:b

Sequence 5

The hero is tired and depressed and losing hope

Seq. 5 mini-climax @75 minutes


ACT 2:b
Sequence 6

All is bleak

“worst moment”

Seq. 6 mini-climax @90 minutes


ACT 3

Sequence 7

The hero takes a stand…

“Storm the castle”

Seq. 7 mini-climax @105 minutes


ACT 3

Sequence 8

Hero faces greatest nightmare

“new way of life”

Sequence 8 Climax @120 minutes


Is this formula written in stone? Probably not for established writers who know when and why to break the rules; but if you’re just starting out, you may want to stick with it. Just tweak the times of the mini-climaxes to coincide with the length of your book.